My pepeha

Limerick poem

Onomatopoeia Poem.

Cinquains Poem.

This is my gif.

We are leaning to make a gif.

Lords Prayer

WALT: write the Lord's prayer so we can say it in Te Reo.

E tō mātou Matua i te Rangi

Kia tapu tou Ingoa 

Kia tae mai tou rangatira-tanga.

Kia meatia tau e pai ai

ki runga i te whenua,

kia rite ano ki to te rangi.

Homai ki a mātou aianei

he taro mā mātou mo tēnei ra.

Murua o mātou hara

Me mātou hoki e muru nei

i o te hunga e hara ana ki a mātou.

Aua hoki mātou e kawea kia whaka-waia;

Engari whaka-orangia matou, i te kino:

Nou hoki te rangatira-tanga,

te kaha,

me te kororia

Ake, ake, ake.

Āmine.

Explain Writing Making.

In our  Tautoro School  we have so many new students who have enrolled  in our school. Because of the new enrollments every time we have a  powhiri or assembly we always get squashed, and we feel really uncomfortable. So the facility that is needed in Tautoro School  is a new hall. Why do we need a hall? First a  hall is needed by Tautoro School because when we have new students enrolling in our school, every new child needs  a powhiri. There are more students enrolling into our school every week and we are feeling really squashed in our small library.  If we had a hall our manuhiri would feel more comfortable and they would be able to shake everybody's hands without pushing past students and then they would feel very welcomed, comfortable and feel more relaxed.  Secondly: if we had a community hall we would also be able to play sports inside.   If it was raining or if it became too hot. Then we wouldn't be missing out on our fitness and fitness  makes you feel good and it exercises your brain. And this would help students to concentrate more in class. Another reason why we need a hall is so that we could get a kitchen built in the hall then we would be able to have technology at our school instead of travelling to town to use another school's kitchen.  We would be able to learn how to cook and bake and then we would be able to help our whanau cook and bake at home. Last of all we need  a hall because our community would be able to use the hall in the weekend which will bring  all our local communities together for meetings or gala days. In conclusion, I strongly believe we need a community hall at our school because our  Tautoro school community is growing every week with new students enrolling into our school. It is important  that we have a new hall so that we won't be squashed and then we would feel comfortable and then we would listen better because we would all feel relaxed. If we don't have a hall we will always feel squashed and we will not have enough room in our teeny library for new students.

                                 Score     Reasons why you have given this mark

Ideas	4	You have lots of ideas that connect to the topic with some extra information.
Structure Language	3	You have some structure for the of writing.
Organisation	4	You put my ideas in groups and in order.
Vocabulary	3	You can write a lot of simple words and some extra words to add detail.
Sentence Structure	3	You are beginning to write sentences of different lengths.
Punctuation	3	You are beginning to use different types of sentences.
Spelling	5	You spell the majority of Essential list words correctly.
Total	25	3b

IHUMATAO

We have been learning about Ihumatao and the land issue. We had to choose a side Maori or Settles and write how it would of been at the the time.

“I will take your land away”,I yelled 

I stood glaring at them, as I was gliding across the land.

You have no chance against the Queens law I thought. 

I gazed around slowly. I could see men holding weapons up above their shoulders.

I could hear the Maori women crying.

I could smell victory.

Persuasive Writing

New year Celebrations

We are learning to code.

I am learning to code. I use Scatch Jr 

MY HOLIDAY.

WALT use the correct structure for recount Success Criteria:

• I will have a title
• I will have an orientation (who what where when how)
• I will use sequence words(first next after then finally)
• I talked about how i felt

29.4.19

Holiday with my family

On Saturday my family and I were getting ready to go to Hamilton. We woke up at 4.43 to get ready. I was so tired when I woke up to get ready to go to Walkworth.

First we left our house at 6.30 We were going to

visit my Mum,Dad,Brothers and Sister.

My family and I were so excited.

At 9.00 we stopped to have something to

eat, then my papa said “who needs to go toilet” I said “not me”, Then I saw my Dad and my sister, in Warkworth we got out our bags in the van and put them in my Dad’s car. After that then we said goodbye Nan and Poppies.

Next we stopped at Countdown in Auckland, then we made it to Hamilton. I got out of the car then we went inside and I said hi everyone we”re here.

After I said to my Dad can we go to the BMX track please he said “yes”.

Then I went on the PS4 I was playing fortnite and Black ops 4, it was fun playing the games. Then my Dad said do you want to go now then I said “coming” then we made it to the BMX track, when I first got on the BMX track I had butterflies but I was excited at the sack sametime.

Then after that my Dad was videoing me going on the track. Finally we went home to have lunch then dinner after dinner I went back on the PS4, then I went to bed at 2.50, I felt tired so I went to sleep, I said it has been a fun day today.