I am learning to add talking to make my writing more interesting.
19.06.17.
At the Park
On Saturday afternoon I went to Hamilton with my Nana and Papa to visit my Mum and Dad. It was dark when we got to Hamilton. We went to my Uncle’s house to stay and we watched TV.
When I woke up in the morning my Dad said to me, “It is time to go to the park.”
At the park Yay. and we played tag and I got my sister.
After that me and my sister said, “It is good playing tag.” Our family had a great time at the park.
Then we had lunch at the fish and chips shop and that was yum. “This is Yum,” I said to my Mum.
It was an excellent day because we were with our Mum and Dad.
