My self assessment

Plastic Pollution

Plastic pollution is a growing problem that is affecting people, fish, seabirds and sea animal all over the world.

What has been done to reduce the plastic pollution problem?

One thing to reduce the plastic pollution problem, some governments are banning plastic shopping bags and instead they are using cotton bags.

Another thing to reduce the problem is that in NZ some students are using litter less lunch boxes.

Lastly to reduce the problem is that people are picking the rubbish up so then there will be no more plastic in the oceans that means the oceans will be nice and clean.

In Conclusion some people send the plastic to the factories around the world to make fernarcher, clothes and tools, so we can live in a cleaner and better place to live in.

	Precise topic words
	Conjunctions-because, then, so
	Cause and effect words-so, because, as a result of
	Action words.

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Explanation Writing My self assessment.

Explanation Writing Structure.

Plastic Pollution

Plastic pollution is a growing problem that is affecting people, fish, seabirds and sea animal all over the world.

What has been done to reduce the plastic pollution problem?

One thing to reduce the plastic pollution problem, some governments are banning plastic shopping bags and instead they are using cotton bags.

Another thing to reduce the problem is that in NZ some students are using litter less lunch boxes.

Lastly to reduce the problem is that people are picking the rubbish up so there will be no more plastic in the oceans that means the oceans will be nice and clean.

In Conclusion some people send the plastic to the factories around the world to make fernarcher, clothes and tools, so

	Beginning/Introduction.
	Body-1st paragraph- Main idea.
	Body - 2nd paragraph - Supporting detail.
	Body - 3rd paragraph - Supporting detail.
	Conclusion.

Explanation Writing My self assessment

Explanation Writing Language.

Plastic Pollution

Plastic pollution is a growing problem that is affecting people, fish, seabirds and sea animal all over the world.

What has been done to reduce the plastic pollution problem?

One thing to reduce the plastic pollution problem, some governments are banning plastic shopping bags and instead they are using cotton bags.

Another thing to reduce the problem is that in NZ some students are using litter less lunch boxes.

Lastly to reduce the problem is that people are picking the rubbish up so then there will be no more plastic in the oceans that means the oceans will be nice and clean.

In Conclusion some people send the plastic to the factories around the world to make fernarcher, clothes and tools, so we can live in a cleaner and better place to live in.

	Precise topic words
	Conjunctions-because, then, so
	Cause and effect words-so, because, as a result of
	Action words.

Term 4 Goal Setting.

 Here is my term 4 goal setting .

Recount Writing At Hamilton Zoo.

WALT use the correct stucture and language for Recount Writing.

16.10.2018

On Thursday me and my family went to Hamilton Zoo.

I had a huge smile on on my face to go to the Zoo.

First we paid and I got a map to show me the way to look at the animals. I saw my Aunty and Uncle and the birds. We went in the rainforest. Then I saw spider monkeys, catfish, bisons, rhinos, and Zebras.

I said, “The animals look so AMAZING and different.”

After that I had lunch with my family.

I went back to look at the animals. I saw an owl and a parrot.