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Monday, May 20, 2019

Thursday, May 2, 2019

MY HOLIDAY.


WALT use the correct structure for recount Success Criteria:
  • I will have a title
  • I will have an orientation (who what where when how)
  • I will use sequence words(first next after then finally)
  • I talked about how i felt


29.4.19
Holiday with my family

On Saturday my family and I were getting ready to go to Hamilton. We woke up at 4.43 to get ready. I was so tired when I woke up to get ready to go to Walkworth.
First we left our house at 6.30 We were going to
visit my Mum,Dad,Brothers and Sister.
My family and I were so excited.
At 9.00 we stopped to have something to

eat, then my papa said “who needs to go toilet” I said “not me”, Then I saw my Dad and my sister, in Warkworth we got out our bags in the van and put them in my Dad’s car. After that then we said goodbye Nan and Poppies.
Next we stopped at Countdown in Auckland, then we made it to Hamilton. I got out of the car then we went inside and I said hi everyone we”re here.

After I said to my Dad can we go to the BMX track please he said “yes”.
Then I went on the PS4 I was playing fortnite and Black ops 4, it was fun playing the games. Then my Dad said do you want to go now then I said “coming” then we made it to the BMX track, when I first got on the BMX track I had butterflies but I was excited at the sack sametime.

Then after that my Dad was videoing me going on the track. Finally we went home to have lunch then dinner after dinner I went back on the PS4, then I went to bed at 2.50, I felt tired so I went to sleep, I said it has been a fun day today.