Recount Writing-At the Pools.

I am learning to use the correct structure and language for recount writing.

At the Pools.

26.07.17.

On Saturday afternoon it was a hot blazing day and I went to the Pools. I was excited to go to the Pools. I put on my togs and  I went into the  Pool. It was as cold as ice and I dived in the pool. When I got in the water I was freezing. My body was shaking. I was putting my face in the water. I started racing my brothers and sisters. My brother Zephaniah won because he is fast at swimming.

After that I was hungry and I asked my Nan, “Can we go to the Fish and chips shop?” Nan said, “Yes.” So we brought our fish and chips. Then we bought some sauce at New World and we  brought a drink of water.

After our yummy fish and chips we went home. It was an awesome day.