Persuasive Writing-Healthy Eating.

I am learning to write my opinion and my reasons.

30.03.17                 

I think we should eat healthy food.

Firstly I think we should eat healthy

food so that our eyes can see properly.

Secondly I think we should eat healthy food

because it makes me healthy.

Another reason we should eat healthy food is because we will run fast.

Lastly I think we should eat healthy food so we can have a healthy heart.

So I think we should eat healthy food.  

Recount Writing-At Hamilton.

I am learning to add my thoughts and feelings in my writing.

13.03.17

At Hamilton.

On Thursday I went to Hamilton with my brothers and sister.

Me and my family went to Hamilton and

it was fun. I had a swim and it was cool.

I saw my uncle and aunty and cousin.

I played hide and go seek with cousin.

I liked playing with my cousins.

Recount Writing-Making a park.

 I am learning to write my ideas in order.            

20.03.17

On Thursday I made a park

at KaTui. Me and my brother

got some wood. We made some monkey bars and a slide and a bridge.

It looked cool.

Persuasive Writing - Rules at School.

I am learning to write my opinion with reasons.

14.03.17

Rules at School.

I think we should have rules at school.

Firstly I think we should have rules at school

because people will be happy.

Secondly I think we should have rules at school because there will be no fighting.

Another reason why we should have rules is because people will be safe.

Lastly I think we should have rules at school because we will make our classrooms nice and tidy.

So I think we should have rules at school.

Here are my learning goals for Term 1 2017.

Persuasive Writing

I am learning to write my opinion with reasons.
Being a bucket filling school. 
I think Tautoro School should be a bucket filling school. 
Firstly I think Tautoro School should be a bucket filling school because people will be happy. 
Secondly I think we should be a bucket filling school because people will smile. 
Another reason is everyone will be saying put ups and talking nicely.
Lastly I think Tautoro School should be a bucket filling school because everyone will be kind.
So I think Tautoro School should be a bucket filling school.

I am learning to create a poster with a message and an image to match the message.