Kia ora My name is Zion. I am a year 7 at tautoro. I am in a collaborative class room with my teacher Whaea Gaylene and Miss Lesoa. My favorite school subject is PE and maths. I like to play video games NOT in my spare time but at home.
Friday, March 10, 2017
Persuasive Writing
I am learning to write my opinion with reasons.
Being a bucket filling school.
I think Tautoro School should be a bucket filling school.
Firstly I think Tautoro School should be a bucket filling school because people will be happy.
Secondly I think we should be a bucket filling school because people will smile.
Another reason is everyone will be saying put ups and talking nicely.
Lastly I think Tautoro School should be a bucket filling school because everyone will be kind.
So I think Tautoro School should be a bucket filling school.
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Hi Zion,
ReplyDeleteI like how you have used correct structure for your persuasive writing. You have your opinion and reasons why you think that. Well done. I hope you can write more detail for your ideas next time.