Kia ora
My name is Zion. I am a year 7 at tautoro.
I am in a collaborative class room with my teacher Whaea Gaylene and Miss Lesoa.
My favorite school subject is PE and maths.
I like to play video games NOT in my spare time but at home.
Hello Zion I am a Year Five at Paihia School. I like your onomatopoeia poem. I love poems and poetry. I like rhymes and FIREWORKS! Believe me, fireworks on the best right? I also like the part that you described about the fireworks, like boom, crash, bang Your work is amazing ok.
Hi Zion my name is Zane and I am a year 6 student at Paihia School. I really like your presentation about onomatopoeia because I have never heard of the word onomatopoeia and I really wanted learn about it. I really liked the way that you explained it because It made me learn about something new. To improve you could maybe put other examples instead of a firework. What do you think about onomatopoeia?
Hello Zion I am a Year Five at Paihia School. I like your onomatopoeia poem. I love poems and poetry. I like rhymes and FIREWORKS! Believe me, fireworks on the best right? I also like the part that you described about the fireworks, like boom, crash, bang Your work is amazing ok.
ReplyDeleteHi Zion my name is Zane and I am a year 6 student at Paihia School. I really like your presentation about onomatopoeia because I have never heard of the word onomatopoeia and I really wanted learn about it. I really liked the way that you explained it because It made me learn about something new. To improve you could maybe put other examples instead of a firework. What do you think about onomatopoeia?
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