Persuasive Writing-Healthy Eating.

I am learning to write my opinion and my reasons.

30.03.17                 

I think we should eat healthy food.

Firstly I think we should eat healthy

food so that our eyes can see properly.

Secondly I think we should eat healthy food

because it makes me healthy.

Another reason we should eat healthy food is because we will run fast.

Lastly I think we should eat healthy food so we can have a healthy heart.

So I think we should eat healthy food.  

Recount Writing-At Hamilton.

I am learning to add my thoughts and feelings in my writing.

13.03.17

At Hamilton.

On Thursday I went to Hamilton with my brothers and sister.

Me and my family went to Hamilton and

it was fun. I had a swim and it was cool.

I saw my uncle and aunty and cousin.

I played hide and go seek with cousin.

I liked playing with my cousins.

Recount Writing-Making a park.

 I am learning to write my ideas in order.            

20.03.17

On Thursday I made a park

at KaTui. Me and my brother

got some wood. We made some monkey bars and a slide and a bridge.

It looked cool.

Persuasive Writing - Rules at School.

I am learning to write my opinion with reasons.

14.03.17

Rules at School.

I think we should have rules at school.

Firstly I think we should have rules at school

because people will be happy.

Secondly I think we should have rules at school because there will be no fighting.

Another reason why we should have rules is because people will be safe.

Lastly I think we should have rules at school because we will make our classrooms nice and tidy.

So I think we should have rules at school.

Here are my learning goals for Term 1 2017.

Persuasive Writing

I am learning to write my opinion with reasons.
Being a bucket filling school. 
I think Tautoro School should be a bucket filling school. 
Firstly I think Tautoro School should be a bucket filling school because people will be happy. 
Secondly I think we should be a bucket filling school because people will smile. 
Another reason is everyone will be saying put ups and talking nicely.
Lastly I think Tautoro School should be a bucket filling school because everyone will be kind.
So I think Tautoro School should be a bucket filling school.

I am learning to create a poster with a message and an image to match the message.

Persuasive Writing

I am learning to write my opinion and add reasons.
03.03.17
It is wrong to fight.
I think it is wrong to fight. 
Firstly I think it is wrong to fight because people will get hurt. 
Secondly people get scream at other people. 
Another reason is people will scream at each other.  
Lastly people will smash stuff. 
So I think it is wrong to fight.

Here is the first story I have published on my blog.

I am learning to put my thoughts and feelings in my writing. 

07/03/17
 At the park. 
On Friday afternoon I went to the park with my family. 
First I went on the monkey bars. That was cool. 
After that I went on the wet slide. I liked that slide. 
Next I went on the climbing rock. 
It was hard to climb up the climbing rocks. 
It was fun.