Recount Writing

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25.07.18

Going to my Mum and Dad's house.  

On a cold windy Saturday morning me and my family
went to meet my Mum and Dad and my brothers,
Riva and Denzel and my sister, Summer.
They live in Hamilton.
We travelled to Hamilton in a van. It was a long journey.

As we were getting closer to Hamilton I had a huge
smile on my face. I couldn’t wait to see my Mum and Dad.
When we got there I gave my Mum and Dad a huge hug
and then I hugged my brothers and my sister.
We talked about our trip.

I said to my Mum, “I’ve missed seeing you.”

My Mum said, “Me too.”
I had food like nachos.
After our dinner we watched a movie called Incredibles 2.
When I finished watching Incredibles 2 I played Minecraft.
When I was playing Minecraft I made a big house. It was so big.

Family day.Term 2 2018.

  here is a Cinquain poem adout the sun.

Learning Wall- Term 2 2018

I have been working to achieve my goals.

My reading level-Term 2 2018

This is a Level 22 text. I am reading at my expected level.        

My reading level-Term 2 2018

This is a Level 22 text.I am reading at my expected level.  

Term 2 goal Setting.

I will work hard to achieve my leaning goals.

My Holiday Recount.

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03.05.18

At Leap                                           

On a beautiful Monday afternoon I went to Leap with my family.
Leap is a place that has heaps of different kinds of trampolines.

Leap is in Hamilton.

I was so excited to go to Leap even my brothers and sisters were excited too. I was very excited to go to Leap with my family. First I paid for Leap to play on the trampolines with my brothers and sisters.

Next I played on the trampolines and I did some forward flips. I did heaps and heaps. I said, “Ouch my neck hurts when I do forward flips.

Then I stopped doing forward flips. When I stopped doing forward flips I started jumping on the trampolines normally.

I had cool fun at Leap. The trampolines are awesome.

After that I went to an American lolly shop in Hamilton.

At the American lolly shop there were heaps of American

Lollies. I was amazed at all the lollies. They looked delicious.

Finally I went home with my family and played on the

Games. It was fun playing on the games.