MY HOLIDAY.

WALT use the correct structure for recount Success Criteria:

• I will have a title
• I will have an orientation (who what where when how)
• I will use sequence words(first next after then finally)
• I talked about how i felt

29.4.19

Holiday with my family

On Saturday my family and I were getting ready to go to Hamilton. We woke up at 4.43 to get ready. I was so tired when I woke up to get ready to go to Walkworth.

First we left our house at 6.30 We were going to

visit my Mum,Dad,Brothers and Sister.

My family and I were so excited.

At 9.00 we stopped to have something to

eat, then my papa said “who needs to go toilet” I said “not me”, Then I saw my Dad and my sister, in Warkworth we got out our bags in the van and put them in my Dad’s car. After that then we said goodbye Nan and Poppies.

Next we stopped at Countdown in Auckland, then we made it to Hamilton. I got out of the car then we went inside and I said hi everyone we”re here.

After I said to my Dad can we go to the BMX track please he said “yes”.

Then I went on the PS4 I was playing fortnite and Black ops 4, it was fun playing the games. Then my Dad said do you want to go now then I said “coming” then we made it to the BMX track, when I first got on the BMX track I had butterflies but I was excited at the sack sametime.

Then after that my Dad was videoing me going on the track. Finally we went home to have lunch then dinner after dinner I went back on the PS4, then I went to bed at 2.50, I felt tired so I went to sleep, I said it has been a fun day today.  

Plastic Pollution.

I created this prsentation to share my explanation writing about Plastic Pollution.

 My self assessment

Plastic Pollution

Plastic pollution is a growing problem that is affecting people, fish, seabirds and sea animal all over the world.

What has been done to reduce the plastic pollution problem?

One thing to reduce the plastic pollution problem, some governments are banning plastic shopping bags and instead they are using cotton bags.

Another thing to reduce the problem is that in NZ some students are using litter less lunch boxes.

Lastly to reduce the problem is that people are picking the rubbish up so then there will be no more plastic in the oceans that means the oceans will be nice and clean.

In Conclusion some people send the plastic to the factories around the world to make fernarcher, clothes and tools, so we can live in a cleaner and better place to live in.

	Precise topic words
	Conjunctions-because, then, so
	Cause and effect words-so, because, as a result of
	Action words.

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Explanation Writing My self assessment.

Explanation Writing Structure.

Plastic Pollution

Plastic pollution is a growing problem that is affecting people, fish, seabirds and sea animal all over the world.

What has been done to reduce the plastic pollution problem?

One thing to reduce the plastic pollution problem, some governments are banning plastic shopping bags and instead they are using cotton bags.

Another thing to reduce the problem is that in NZ some students are using litter less lunch boxes.

Lastly to reduce the problem is that people are picking the rubbish up so there will be no more plastic in the oceans that means the oceans will be nice and clean.

In Conclusion some people send the plastic to the factories around the world to make fernarcher, clothes and tools, so

	Beginning/Introduction.
	Body-1st paragraph- Main idea.
	Body - 2nd paragraph - Supporting detail.
	Body - 3rd paragraph - Supporting detail.
	Conclusion.

Explanation Writing My self assessment

Explanation Writing Language.

Plastic Pollution

Plastic pollution is a growing problem that is affecting people, fish, seabirds and sea animal all over the world.

What has been done to reduce the plastic pollution problem?

One thing to reduce the plastic pollution problem, some governments are banning plastic shopping bags and instead they are using cotton bags.

Another thing to reduce the problem is that in NZ some students are using litter less lunch boxes.

Lastly to reduce the problem is that people are picking the rubbish up so then there will be no more plastic in the oceans that means the oceans will be nice and clean.

In Conclusion some people send the plastic to the factories around the world to make fernarcher, clothes and tools, so we can live in a cleaner and better place to live in.

	Precise topic words
	Conjunctions-because, then, so
	Cause and effect words-so, because, as a result of
	Action words.

Term 4 Goal Setting.

 Here is my term 4 goal setting .

Recount Writing At Hamilton Zoo.

WALT use the correct stucture and language for Recount Writing.

16.10.2018

On Thursday me and my family went to Hamilton Zoo.

I had a huge smile on on my face to go to the Zoo.

First we paid and I got a map to show me the way to look at the animals. I saw my Aunty and Uncle and the birds. We went in the rainforest. Then I saw spider monkeys, catfish, bisons, rhinos, and Zebras.

I said, “The animals look so AMAZING and different.”

After that I had lunch with my family.

I went back to look at the animals. I saw an owl and a parrot.