I created this prsentation to share my explanation writing about Plastic Pollution.
Kia ora My name is Zion. I am a year 7 at tautoro. I am in a collaborative class room with my teacher Whaea Gaylene and Miss Lesoa. My favorite school subject is PE and maths. I like to play video games NOT in my spare time but at home.
Thursday, November 1, 2018
Tuesday, October 30, 2018
My self assessment
Plastic Pollution
Plastic pollution is a growing problem that is affecting people, fish, seabirds and sea animal all over the world.
What has been done to reduce the plastic pollution problem?
One thing to reduce the plastic pollution problem, some governments are banning plastic shopping bags and instead they are using cotton bags.
Another thing to reduce the problem is that in NZ some students are using litter less lunch boxes.
Lastly to reduce the problem is that people are picking the rubbish up so then there will be no more plastic in the oceans that means the oceans will be nice and clean.
In Conclusion some people send the plastic to the factories around the world to make fernarcher, clothes and tools, so we can live in a cleaner and better place to live in.
Precise topic words
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Conjunctions-because, then, so
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Cause and effect words-so, because, as a result of
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Explanation Writing My self assessment.
Explanation Writing Structure.
Plastic Pollution
Plastic pollution is a growing problem that is affecting people, fish, seabirds and sea animal all over the world.
What has been done to reduce the plastic pollution problem?
One thing to reduce the plastic pollution problem, some governments are banning plastic shopping bags and instead they are using cotton bags.
Another thing to reduce the problem is that in NZ some students are using litter less lunch boxes.
Lastly to reduce the problem is that people are picking the rubbish up so there will be no more plastic in the oceans that means the oceans will be nice and clean.
In Conclusion some people send the plastic to the factories around the world to make fernarcher, clothes and tools, so
Beginning/Introduction.
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Body-1st paragraph- Main idea.
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Body - 2nd paragraph - Supporting detail.
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Body - 3rd paragraph - Supporting detail.
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Conclusion.
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Explanation Writing My self assessment
Explanation Writing Language.
Plastic Pollution
Plastic pollution is a growing problem that is affecting people, fish, seabirds and sea animal all over the world.
What has been done to reduce the plastic pollution problem?
One thing to reduce the plastic pollution problem, some governments are banning plastic shopping bags and instead they are using cotton bags.
Another thing to reduce the problem is that in NZ some students are using litter less lunch boxes.
Lastly to reduce the problem is that people are picking the rubbish up so then there will be no more plastic in the oceans that means the oceans will be nice and clean.
In Conclusion some people send the plastic to the factories around the world to make fernarcher, clothes and tools, so we can live in a cleaner and better place to live in.
Precise topic words
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Conjunctions-because, then, so
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Cause and effect words-so, because, as a result of
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Action words.
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Thursday, October 18, 2018
Recount Writing At Hamilton Zoo.
WALT use the correct stucture and language for Recount Writing.
16.10.2018
On Thursday me and my family went to Hamilton Zoo.
I had a huge smile on on my face to go to the Zoo.
First we paid and I got a map to show me the way to look at the animals. I saw my Aunty and Uncle and the birds. We went in the rainforest. Then I saw spider monkeys, catfish, bisons, rhinos, and Zebras.
I said, “The animals look so AMAZING and different.”
After that I had lunch with my family.
I went back to look at the animals. I saw an owl and a parrot.
Thursday, September 27, 2018
Thursday, September 13, 2018
Reading-Using information from a text.
WALT use information from a text to create a presentation.
Sunday, September 9, 2018
Report Writing-The white tailed spider.
WALT use information from a text to write a report.
White Tailed spiders.
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A white tailed spider is a poison spider.
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The white tailed spider has a long,dark,grey,body with a white patch at the end. It has orange - brown bands around its legs. There are special tufts of hair at the ends of the legs. A white tailed spider is about 12-15 millimeters long.
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The white tailed spider lives under bark and plants in dark places. They also have been seen in houses in dark places.
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The white tailed spider can poison other spiders and other insects.
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The white tailed spiders came to NZ over one hundred years ago
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Wednesday, September 5, 2018
Wednesday, August 29, 2018
Reading" Extraordinary Earthworms
WALT use information from the text to create a presentation.
My Father's Day Poem
Here is my cinquain poem about my Dad.
Wednesday, August 15, 2018
Creating a poster.
WALT use information from the text to create a poster.
Goal Setting Term 3 2018
Here are my learning goals for Term 3 2018. I will try to achieve them.
Sunday, August 12, 2018
Recount Writing Getting a power cut.
06.08.18
WALT use strategies to SPICE UP our writing.
Getting a power cut
On a beautiful Sunday afternoon I was playing subway surf on my ipad but then the power cut came and turned off my ipad.
I said, “No!” I nearly got the mystery box but the power cut turned my ipad off. When the power turned off I got the torch out and turned the torch on. I said, “I am scared.”
I said, “No!” I nearly got the mystery box but the power cut turned my ipad off. When the power turned off I got the torch out and turned the torch on. I said, “I am scared.”
It took so long waiting until the power came back on.
It was taking way too long so I said, “I am sleepy.”
I went to my bed to sleep.
Thursday, July 26, 2018
Recount Writing
WALT use show ' don't tell ' to spice up our writing
25.07.18
Going to my Mum and Dad's house.
On a cold windy Saturday morning me and my family
went to meet my Mum and Dad and my brothers,
Riva and Denzel and my sister, Summer.
They live in Hamilton.
We travelled to Hamilton in a van. It was a long journey.
went to meet my Mum and Dad and my brothers,
Riva and Denzel and my sister, Summer.
They live in Hamilton.
We travelled to Hamilton in a van. It was a long journey.
As we were getting closer to Hamilton I had a huge
smile on my face. I couldn’t wait to see my Mum and Dad.
When we got there I gave my Mum and Dad a huge hug
and then I hugged my brothers and my sister.
We talked about our trip.
smile on my face. I couldn’t wait to see my Mum and Dad.
When we got there I gave my Mum and Dad a huge hug
and then I hugged my brothers and my sister.
We talked about our trip.
I said to my Mum, “I’ve missed seeing you.”
My Mum said, “Me too.”
I had food like nachos.
After our dinner we watched a movie called Incredibles 2.
When I finished watching Incredibles 2 I played Minecraft.
When I was playing Minecraft I made a big house. It was so big.
I had food like nachos.
After our dinner we watched a movie called Incredibles 2.
When I finished watching Incredibles 2 I played Minecraft.
When I was playing Minecraft I made a big house. It was so big.
Monday, July 2, 2018
Sunday, May 6, 2018
My Holiday Recount.
WALT use the correct structure and language for Recount Writing.
03.05.18
At Leap
On a beautiful Monday afternoon I went to Leap with my family.
Leap is a place that has heaps of different kinds of trampolines.
Leap is a place that has heaps of different kinds of trampolines.
Leap is in Hamilton.
I was so excited to go to Leap even my brothers and sisters were excited too. I was very excited to go to Leap with my family. First I paid for Leap to play on the trampolines with my brothers and sisters.
Next I played on the trampolines and I did some forward flips. I did heaps and heaps. I said, “Ouch my neck hurts when I do forward flips.
Then I stopped doing forward flips. When I stopped doing forward flips I started jumping on the trampolines normally.
I had cool fun at Leap. The trampolines are awesome.
After that I went to an American lolly shop in Hamilton.
At the American lolly shop there were heaps of American
Lollies. I was amazed at all the lollies. They looked delicious.
Finally I went home with my family and played on the
Games. It was fun playing on the games.
Thursday, April 12, 2018
Did I achieve my learning goals for Term 1 2018?
Watch my video to see if I achieved my goals for this term.
Sunday, March 25, 2018
My awesome learning wall.
Here is a snapshot of the results of my maths, writing and reading tests and where I am at in my learning.
Saturday, March 17, 2018
Swimming on my back.
My group and I are showing how we
can swim a length of the pool on our backs
with a flutterboard.
Freestyle swim.
My group and I are swimming one length of the pool.
We have been learning the arm actions for Freestyle swim.
Swimming kick.
My group and I are showing our skills
of swimming a length of the pool kicking our feet and using
a flutterboard.
My Reading Test Term 1 2018
This is a Level 21 text.
My Time at School is 2 years and 10 months so I am reading at
my expected level.
Thursday, March 15, 2018
Wednesday, March 14, 2018
Sunday, February 18, 2018
Reading: Too many Possums.
WALT find information in the text.
Here is my presentation about Possums and how they are pests in NZ.
Recount Writing.
WALT use the correct structure Recount Writing. At Home.
12/02/18
On Saturday morning I stayed home with my family.
I said to my brother, “Can I play on your chromebook?”
He said, “Yes you can go on my chromebook.” So I got on the chromebook. It was fun to go on my brother’s chromebook. Next my brother said, “You can go off the chromebook now.” After that I had lunch I was excited to have lunch. After that I went to my bed because I was so tired. Later on I went to sleep, after 7 minutes my little sister woke me up. Then I had dinner. I said, “Yes! Dinners ready. I am so hungry.” I ate all my dinner and it was so yummy. Finally I asked my brother if I can go on his chromebook. He said, “Yes you can go on my chromebook.” I played the games on Friv. After 4 minutes. my brother said, “You can go off now.” So I got off the chromebook. When I got off the chromebook I went in the lounge and watched tv. I watched Kubo and the two strings. I said, “This movie is a cool.”
Thursday, February 8, 2018
Tuesday, February 6, 2018
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